A Short Poem On Dancing

Flash Fiction 55, Poetry | Posted by Jannie on 31 January 2013 @ 7:50 PM 45 Comments

then_you_kiss_me

for some reason
I’ve been picturing you
lately in ’70s leather coats

and just now
in stacked-heel
quality boots

that itch to
get up and dance.
so they do. and

you follow them
with me, all over
the hardwood

floors
of our
hearts

while
we hold
hands.

then
you
kiss
me

and
time
starts.

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  • 1

    On 15 March 2013 at 7:26 am

    Leslie said, 

    A beautiful dance
    a romantic tune

  • 2

    On 15 March 2013 at 10:19 pm

    Jannie said, 

    Ladies, I am verklempt.

    Namaste.

    Shalom.

    Drink green beer this Sunday!! :)

    But seriously, thank you. I love you!

    oxoxoxoxo

  • 3

    On 27 March 2013 at 11:30 am

    Youko said, 

    How about talking about the song that’s playing. If the girl likes the song how about asking her if it could be “our” special song? Talk about other songs that person sings or just other songs. Tell her she looks pretty. Tell her you like her dress ask where she got it from. Tell her you think your mom/sister/cousin shops there. Or you really like her, or how pretty her hair is ask if she did it. If she’s not someone you really like just talk about anything. For example homework, school, ur brother or sister, mother and father. I wish you the best!!

  • 4

    On 17 April 2013 at 11:52 pm

    Alice Audrey said, 

    Yep. I’ve been blessed. :)

  • 5

    On 25 April 2013 at 2:27 pm

    Jannie said, 

    Youko — you give great spam!!

    AA, dittoes on the blessedness.

    xooxoxoxox

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